Friday, September 03, 2010

No, Please, Let Me Go

Because it’s about to become--or has already become, and is about to be released--what the new dust jackets and paperback covers will surely advertise as a Major Motion Picture, I thought take the timely opportunity to reread Kazuo Ishiguro’s 2005 novel, Never Let Me Go. When it first appeared, reviewers struggled mightily to discuss-without-revealing-fully the main conceit of its alternate world, but since I've never given a damn about SPOILERS, and since Ishiguro, for all the affected reticence of his prose on the point, basically gives it all away in the first chapter, I won't operate with any such compunctions. Ishiguro imagines a world where, beginning sometime after the Second World War, science successfully achieves human cloning, and the fruits of this discovery result in a society where clones are created and raised to young adulthood, at which point their organs are harvested until they die. Ishiguro invents a clever bureaucratic language, some of it simply the language of real contemporary medicine. The clones make "donations" until they "complete." The story takes place at one of the better schools-cum-orphanages where cloned children are raised and indoctrinated before a brief, semi-independent adulthood, donations, and death.

Because it's "literary," and because Ishiguro is a serious writer, we're not really supposed to notice just how goofy this imaginary setup is. It doesn't make sense. You'd raise children and send them to school only to kill them as adults? What about the costs? Wouldn't it make more sense for a society so cavalier about life to, I don't know, harvest the organs of prisoners. What happens when someone needs a heart or a lung transplant? What do they do to the rest of the organs? I mean, uh . . . and they let these kids wander around the country? Doesn't anyone ever try to escape? And uh . . . and something about souls? Do they have them? Huh, what? You mean in a society that is literally capable of creating human life from scratch, the moral dilemma is determining whether or not ensoulment occurs. Like, uh, that's the animating force driving the equivalent of an abolitionist movement? Huh?

Now, to be fair, Ishiguro is writing a sort of fable, and yet I think it incredibly unjust that his literary reputation, which is exaggerated to begin with, ought to shield him from the simple scrutiny any half-assed Star Trek novelizer would face upon completion of a time-travel plot. Ishiguro, whatever his ambitions, wrote a speculative tale, and we're obliged to ask if his speculative present is consistent with itself. Because he takes great pains to make this world very much like our own--so much like our own that it has only this one, terrible difference, the incoherence of the idea is more pronounced. He should have set it on Planet Krelmek in the year 2792 or something. I'd've been like, oh, man, raising clones just to kill them and harvest their organs? Sick. Then I would've bitched about how unrealistic was the portrayal of FTL space travel or something.

But, no, you know, seriously, I get it, it's not really a tale about forced organ donation; it's a tale about predestination, love lost, opportunity missed, hopelessness. It's the Remains of a Pale View of the Floating World. It's quiet and oblique. Its moments of reticent joy are forever burdened by the undercurrent of sadness. And yet it is wholly undone in a way that, say, P.D. James' Children of Men (NOW A MAJOR MOTION PICTURE!) is not, because in its headlong rush to domesticate its speculative heart and become a novel about little people and their lives, it cowardly shies away from contemplating its own premise. I mean, James' novel rests on an even more unbelievable foundation, that humanity suddenly and completely loses the ability to reproduce, but we suspend disbelief because it asks all the interesting questions. What would such a world be like? How would people react to the sudden eradication of their posterity? What would happen to families? What would happen to love? What would governments become? Who would be debauched, and who would merely despair? It contemplates mortality in the most radical sense. Stripped of a future, stripped even of the consolation of a generic human progeny, what would become of us?

Ishiguro's characters--in his fashion, we are strictly limited to their limited perceptions--are likewise the victims of a strict and inescapable mortality, and yet he never once looks beyond their thin lives to ask what sort of society could create these children? What kind of a people would husband human beings, even artificial ones, to adulthood in order to kill them like livestock? His characters aren't stupid; if anything, they're hypersensitive and overly bright, yet they experience no qualms about the fact that they're being farmed. They acquiesce to having no future even as they are depicted wishing for one. Why? What prevents their escape? What explains their servility? Regular people recoil from them slightly, and yet they are permitted, in effect, to have several fully funded Wanderjahren, driving about the countryside and visiting cities and towns without supervision before they are, you know, taken to a hospital and killed! In the words of my favorite reviewer: who's fuckin' with my meds?

25 comments:

Jason0x21 said...

This is exactly the same type of problem I had with "The Road" winning a fucking Pulitzer. There are literally hundreds of better written post apocalyptic journey books. They're just "science fiction".

Seriously, when I see the abandoned and yet fully stocked emergency shelter coming from a chapter away...

Devin the Dude said...

IOZ says:
This connection you think you feel between yourself and your world is illegitimate. This most intimate of experiences, this aesthetic, this "all you've got," is nothing. You think this [guy] can [write]. No. no. no. I'll tell you who can [write]. I know what you should like. I'm smart, you see, or unrepressed, or...well, anyway, my opinions apply to you. You SHOULD like what I like. If you don't, you're less than (me) you're unclassy, prole-ish. Oh, no, this is NOT an authoritarian attitude, an attempt to universalize the personal, to pit my experiences against yours.

But dude, this is intellectual violence. This is over-against. This is...justify it. Quantify it. Give me a reason to believe your experience of beauty, or your analytic, your arguments, are anything more than that, that they have anything to do with, or can enhance, my experience of beauty.

mark r. said...

Did you see Terminator Salvation? Boy, the holes in that one.

fish said...

this is intellectual violence

Are you kidding me? This is intellectual violence.

IOZ is giving an opinion, as most people do when they review some form of art. I think you need to take the phrase "your mileage may vary" more to heart...

Devin the Dude said...

There's no shortage of posts here at IOZ where our hero (and I do love his work, really) assumes unique access to beauty, as you must be aware. This novel sucks (OK if there's propositional content, but that's rarely the point), that band sucks...

My point, which I'd like to get back to, has to do with ANYONE's ability to make universal statements about beauty that people need to accede to or be considered less than

IOZ said...

hey fish - "Devin the Dude" is just yukking at "Devin Lenda" by reproducing his comments from yesterdays thread.

FlyingRodent said...

Journeyman UK sci-fi geezer Michael Marshall Smith wrote that plot in Spares back in the '90s, a plot that also formed the basis for a terrible Michael Bay film. MMS also wrote one called Only Forward, which was about a secret agent guy who travels into people's dreams. Somebody send that man a cheque, for God's sake...

fish said...

Whoops. Satire is theft.

Richard said...

"There are literally hundreds of better written post apocalyptic journey books."

No, there aren't. There are, it's true, "literally hundreds of post apocalyptic journey books", though, I'll give you that.

That you could predict the fully stocked emergency shelter is utterly meaningless.

Anonymous said...

Note to self: Add Logan's Run and Coma to Netflix queue.

Bruschettaboy said...

I think you missed the sting in the last chapter (spoiler etc). The point is that the kids in the book are totally untypical of the normal clones. They're the result of a specific social/political experiment (one which was judged to be a failure) to see if it would be better to give the clones something like a normal life, rather than locking them up in huge horrible concentration camp/battery farms. The system itself runs exactly in the way you suggest - a few progressive-hippy types tried to do it differently and then discovered that it was inconvenient and expensive to do so.

Picador said...

What Bruschettaboy said (only I thought this revelation came pretty close to the beginning of the book, not the end).

When did IOZ turn into such a naif? He seems to disagree with Ishiguro about how people respond to horrific repression and exploitation: IOZ says they'd rebel en masse, Ishiguro says they'd obey the dictates of their upbringing and the bureaucratic doublethink that continues to pervade their lives and go like lambs to the slaughter. Given the data on human history, I think Ishiguro is the realist here, and I certainly think his story is more interesting than the "clone uprising" novel IOZ seems to have simmering on the back burner.

BDR said...

I *like* quiet and oblique, especially as I'm loud and obtuse.

I thought *NLMG* uncanny and frightening, but I'm a fool for late Ishiguro: I love *When We Were Orphans* and *The Unconsoled* on of my three or four favorite novels.

Jason0x21 said...

Banal, cliched predictability is a trademark of cheap genre fiction. The only thing that distinguished that particular effort was the near-complete avoidance of the double-quote key.

I'm not saying that makes it bad. It's great for medium length airport delays when the laptop battery is running low, but Pulitzer? Maybe I'm just out of touch with what they're looking for these days.

Richard said...

I'd say you're missing the point.

rowan said...

Yeah, but did you see the trailer for the book? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ

James N. said...

I like it that someone read Cormac McCarthy for plot.

Christopher said...

Man, now the Parts: The Clonus Horror guys are gonna have to start another lawsuit.

Anonymous said...

It's "atypical," unshole.

dhex said...

it's a silly setup, but a good book regardless.

Devin Lenda said...

I'll take your derision as a sign of respect, devin the dude, mainly because it serves me. That's what works around here. I take shit literally. When I was three, apparently, my aunt called from NJ (I was in PA) and said "it's snowing there huh?" and I was like "no it's fucking not." And she was like "but the weatherdude said it snowed there recently" and I was like "yeah well technically I guess it's snowed here recently but it's not snowing right now, bitch." Well you know, literally. I also have a problem with voice modulation.

Anyway, I kinda destroyed devin the dude's mockery with recent comments so please check. But that destruction was serious so naturally it shouldn't be taken, you know, seriously. Everything's a joke and that. I mean I guess there's a point in there. LIfe doesn't matter cuz ya die but yes it does cuz it's all you got. Time to go bowling.

JS said...

This couldn't be much worse than what supposedly is the worst of the GALAXY MAGAZINE dystopian novels, "Preferred Risk". in which insurance companies have taken over the world. They are opposed by a mutant guy who has the power to regenerate limbs, thus allowing him to deliberately maim himself and to file claim after claim on the insurance tyrants, thus threatening the stability of their inhuman rule.

At least, I think this is the plot. I've never read either Ishiguro's book or "Edson McCann's" book, and don't intend to, as my patience is too short for most sci-fi these days.

JS said...

http://georgekelley.org/?p=3500

Well, the Powers cover is great, especially in it's complete magnificent indifference to the actual content of the novel.

Further information on the part insurance companies play in literature can be found on this obsessive page:

http://www.worldlingo.com/ma/enwiki/en/Fictional_actuaries

Anyway, the two novels should be reworked so that the fiendish clone farmers are opposed - or at first seem to be opposed - by the cruel insurance tyrants. Throw in a weird psychedelic drug that also causes the user to travel through time, an alien who is actually God who provides inept advice through cash machine messages, and the protagonist also at the same time having to deal with a nasty divorce. The psi-powered limb regenerating guy is also the secret head of the clone farmers and submitting to endless maiming to redeem humanity. And now you have a Philip K. Dick novel, kind of, sort of

JS said...

Add lots of amphetamine, stir, and sell to Donald Wollheim for not very much money at all.

See, I can post recipes too, Mr. Ioz!

Jess said...

I had similar believability objections at some points while reading, but the book as a whole really worked for me. Partially this was the medicine/politics/fear lampshade that Miss Emily hung at the end. (Do humans organize and sustain monstrous exploitations of other humans? Do most humans submit to authority? umm, yes...) Mostly it was getting attached to these characters and feeling pity for their plight, and then realizing that their plight is no different than anyone else's.

We all complete. Many of us imagine that we'd like to plead with God, sometime before the end, even if God turns out to be an impotent dilettante in a wheelchair who lied to us throughout our childhoods and would rather be selling antiques. Life is more about donation than about caring. There is never really a point to any of it.

Of course, tastes differ, and if an allegory like this doesn't "work" for you, I'm not surprised you don't think much of it.

Is it interesting for this to inspire a movie? Was "Repo Men" mentioned at the pitch meeting? It's almost as though people are worried about the escalating cost of health care. Hollywood seems to expect a bit more brutality in medicine than that to which we've grown accustomed.

How awful is English boarding school, that it's basically indistinguishable from a concentration camp for doomed livestock?