It is upon this hill that he will found
a marble-fronted, mud-backed city-state
whose every hour comes ten minutes late,
whose brackish swampland is the solid ground,
whose gun-shy guard dogs skitter at the sound
of dining chairs scraping on a hardwood floor
or the distant slam of someone’s bedroom door,
a cat’s meow, a watch’s beep; around
the city is a park; within the park a zoo
within which lives one white rhinoceros,
majestic, brooding, grand, ridiculous,
last of his species, nothing much to do
but pace and eat and shit and grumble through
the years until he dies of loneliness.
Friday, September 09, 2011
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Weasels Ripped My Flesh for Romney
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Not bad. Moldbug envy? Do all senescent blogs turn to poetry?
I'm glad you liked it Leonard, but seriously, you are the only person on the entire internet who reads that guy.
rhinoceros / ridiculous / loneliness
nice
*woah*
Yinz does the poem. Love it.
You have described my life..
Let it never be said that M'sieur couldn't enjamb with the best of 'em ... 7 outa 14 line-ends (yes 7) ... count 'em fer yerself, fer crissakes.
Seriously - Who Is IOZ?
As a longtime reader of this blog, I have been able to piece together his rarely dropped clues.
IOZ is none other than former Pittsburgh Steelers long snapper Mike Schneck.
Only by unlocking the Masonic symbology of Pittsburgh will you reveal the identity of IOZ. The checkerboard of the popo and the keystone of the state are as good a place as any to begin.
Hey, IOZ, did you ever read Weldon Kees? Reminds me of that, in a good way.
http://youtu.be/9X65Z6JEBUk
The lonely rhinoceros reminded me of a piece by Montag, who has succinctly commented supra:
http://imissfaf.blogspot.com/2007/06/back-talk.html
Thanks Karl, that's fantastic! I love Mr. Belew.
all the little lousy poets comin round
trying to sound
like charlie manson.
and a white man dancin.
Monsieur is way beyond envy, Lenny. And you are not alone, although I dig the good Monsieur as well. Just not the poetry.
Pretty awesome, though the last line doesn't seem to hit me as it should.
I think the reason is the word loneliness. It's the only three-syllable word in the whole piece and it breaks the rhythm that has been so painstakingly built up to that point.
But, listen to me bitch about not jizzing in my pants at the end.
josh marshall should be a regular target;
http://media.talkingpointsmemo.com/slideshow/anonymous-mugshots-unmasked
I think the reason is the word loneliness. It's the only three-syllable word in the whole piece
Majestic? Also applied to the rhino, as it happens. Couple of tetrasyllables too (rhinoceros, ridiculous).
I personally am a little unhappy with 'hour' as an implicit disyllable. Couple of other scansion liberties too -- both easily fixed if a fix were wanted.
But this is a tough crowd. And the quadruple rhyme in the octet is really nice.
Pretty good parody of Michael Smith, there, though the twattish, preenishness is a little OTT.
This will not really work, I suppose this way.
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