Upon the scaffold, Louis says he'll pray,
then: nothing much. A drumroll please. A bird
that's passing overhead the human herd
dips its head; disgusted, looks away;
pities creatures cursed to sing with words.
A latch released, a whir, a thump, the gray
stones of the plaza stained, a single ray
of sunlight hits the surging crowd, the murd-
ered body twitches one last time, then rests;
a pundit goes on CNN and claims
to have seen it coming months before it came,
although, he says, he's not sure of its aims,
and thinks the movement needs a better name,
a list, at least, from which to choose the best.
Friday, October 14, 2011
The Pure Expression of History as the Filmography of Sofia Coppola
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Neat
As soon as I read "Filmography of Sofia Coppola," the only thing I could think of was Scarlett Johansson's ass, so didn't read the poem.
I'm sure it was good, but probably not as great as Scarlett Johansson's ass.
11:11 AM!!
11:11 AM!!
a songbird as unmanned aerial drone with directed-energy weaponry?
which Sofia Coppola movie was that?
Matt Taibbi Suggests 5 Reforms for Wall Street
These are, briefly:
1. Break up the monopolies - The so-called "Too Big to Fail" financial companies – now sometimes called by the more accurate term "Systemically Dangerous Institutions"
2. Pay for your own bailouts - A tax of 0.1 percent on all trades of stocks and bonds and a 0.01 percent tax on all trades of derivatives
3. No public money for private lobbying - A company that receives a public bailout should not be allowed to use the taxpayer's own money to lobby against him.
4. Tax hedge-fund gamblers - For starters, we need an immediate repeal of the preposterous and indefensible carried-interest tax break, which allows hedge-fund titans like Stevie Cohen and John Paulson to pay taxes of only 15 percent on their billions in gambling income, while ordinary Americans pay twice that for teaching kids and putting out fires.
5. Change the way bankers get paid - We need new laws preventing Wall Street executives from getting bonuses upfront for deals that might blow up in all of our faces later.
Read the whole article at
http://www.rollingstone.com/politics/news/my-advice-to-the-occupy-wall-street-protesters-20111012
You know what line can't stand as is, but I'll tell you anyway ... l4 ... the inversion is just a little too noticeable ...
also - like your insouciance regarding the imperfection of "words" in l6, and the little bit of "in your face" with "murd-" in l8.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'm a poet,
And so are you!
Exquisite. Who is IOZ?
... just a buddy helping his buddies out.
Your friend Zizek at Occupy Wall St.
http://vimeo.com/thenewsignificance/slavoj-zizek-we-are-the-awaking-occupy-wall-street
Content aside, you embrace of (and departure from) the sonnet form is superb. Really fine work.
Fuck it, dude, I am offended. Sofia Coppola is my favourite filmmaker. I think Lost in Translation and Marie Antoinette were absolutely and ethereally beautiful films.
Why don't you write some poetry with a positive message instead?
Apart From The Revolution
Each drop of blood a rose shall be
all sorrow shall be dust
blown by breezes to the sea
whose fingers thrust
into the corners of restless night
where creatures of the deep
avoid the flashing harbour lights
in search of endless sleep
there were executions
somebody had to pay
apart from the revolution
it's another working day
a million angels sing
peasants eating cake
wedding bells are ringing
the room begins to shake
the children free from measles all
have healthy teeth and gums
they live in the cathedrals
and worship in the slums
poverty and pollution
have all swept away
apart from the revolution
it's another working day
(John Cooper Clarke)
Seriously, the inversion of the Petrarchan abba baab in the octet is nicely done, as is the hyphenation at the volta. The sestet isn't quite as clean but I figured it was a comment on CNN. :)
A poet fan.
Then
King Kong
went
to
hong
kong
t o p l a y p i n p o n g
with
his dingdong
to Anon @5:38
You're a poet fan?
Then ...
cosi fan tuchus !
Weren't you dying to use the phrase, "the singing blade?"
I personally cannot resist great epithets, but I'm no IOZ.
"Charlotte Corday walked alone
Paris birds sang sugar calls
Charlotte walked down lanes of stone
through the haze from perfume stalls
Charlotte smelt the dead's gangrene
Heard the singing guillotine."
- Peter Weiss, Marat/Sade (shorter title), trans. Geoffrey Skelton/Adrian Mitchell
Lots of nervously whingeing Cordays in the media. Waiting with shivs to gut this movement at the first convenient chance. Making clumsy, hasty attempts at stabs without ever getting busted.
Good one.
OWS = French Revolution?!??!
Hegel Hegel on the wall
Whose got the biggest Weltanschauung of all?
Ms. Coppola made Godfather 3 unwatchable, and Lost in Translation was one of the worst Old Horny White Man movies of all time.
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